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Cat_Demon
06-26-2006, 05:23 PM
Okay, first poem after my big long break! I decided to put this up, since I have been asked why I am not posting no poems. Thanks to all who did message me. Hope you like this one....not sure how I got the idea for it.
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No matter what they may say,
Nothing they could do,
Could ever take me away from him,

I could have everything in this world,
But without him,
It just aint worth it,

Love it when he holds me close,
Whispers words into my ear,
Kisses me on my cheek,
I wanna be with him forever,

No matter how far apart we may be,
I still love him,
Always and forever,

He won't break my heart,
They won't be able to tear us apart,

Don't need all those riches,
Just to know he is here for me,
To know he loves me,

Our bond shall not break,
Our love shall never falter,

Still to this day,
I can say,
I still love him,
No matter where he may go,
He will always be in my heart.

LittleMomo
06-26-2006, 05:26 PM
Awww, what a sweet and cute poem ^ ^ Keep it up.

Fox Demon
06-26-2006, 07:29 PM
I love it!! Soooo good!! I like how you said how he made you feel and that type of thing, like how you told it. Get what I'm saying? Lol if not its okay. Its still a good poem

Aleyna
06-27-2006, 12:46 AM
yay! your posting poems again!!! it sounds like it could be a good love song if u changed it alittle

lol for some reason it reminds me of mary j. blige's song "be without you"

great poem though, hope u post more soon :D

Cat_Demon
07-01-2006, 12:55 AM
Thanks.

I never knew it sounded like a song, Orchid...oh well -Shrugs- That wasn't even the song I was listening to, but I can see what you mean.

For all the others who posted their comments.

I <3 you all.

Side Note:
I am taking another break! (do not hurt me) I have no more inspirations ;_; so you must all wait...give me 2 weeks (from this post) and I might put one out...or if I am asked

Seldrima
07-01-2006, 04:36 AM
Kitty! <3 Your poem is fantastic : D, really amazing, wow I loved it sooo much! it's so heartfelt!*Gasps* An inspirational break. Egad! Well I hope your Muse returns soon.

~Seldy

Ms. Lucy
07-01-2006, 04:38 AM
Aww thats sweet and great poem. I'll
give you a good rating. I liked it. Keep on
writing.

$~$KitteyClaws
07-03-2006, 07:43 PM
I love this poem!! Ya know what this reinds me from Loin king Simba's pride dont ask me why ity just does. Hope you get another idea ^^

Sakura Holic
07-03-2006, 11:17 PM
Catchy poem. I Like it. It's nice. ^ ^ Hope you make more soon. ^ ^

Serenith Youkai
07-04-2006, 12:20 PM
Awww...how sweet I really understand the poem alot. Good job A+ lol

Cat_Demon
07-05-2006, 02:34 PM
Thanks everyone.

I haven't even begun to write a single poem...so I still need at least 1-2 weeks. (Yeah I know I said I would have one out) But I just have nothing to write about. I maybe giving up on writing poems for a long time (if not forever)

Daenerys
07-05-2006, 03:45 PM
You don't need to make excuses for not writing poetry. Trust me, the forum doesn't miss it.