Our Sins

[Daenerys]

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[Aleyna]

it was kinda confusing wen i 1st read it
but after reading it 2 more times i got the message
it sounds like a tragic love poem
i haven't heard 1 in a long time
good idea for a poem ai
hope to see more of these :laugh:

[Daimasukí]

Great poem Ai, I really enjoyed it. It's a strong poem indead and romantic at the same time. Great job Ai, keep them coming.

[Daenerys]

...It's not supposed to be romantic at all.

[animeangellover]

great poem i enjoyed it very much!^_^

[Daenerys]

Thanks for the comments. bumping.