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♥Sakura♥
06-25-2006, 06:07 PM
My life is not my own.

I live to protect others,

Never caring about myself.

There was a time when I could make




my own choices,





But they hurt more than an eternal scar.





I had to make a fresh start,

Clean as the winter's snow.

I promised the dying winter - no, I promised myself,

Forever binding my life.

The winds of wandering carried me

To the souls that embraced me.

Why do they care? I am not worthy.

Why does the fragrance of the God's valley

linger, caressing my soul?

It does not know of the snow.

There can be no peace with the past.

My life is not my own...

Aleyna
06-25-2006, 10:21 PM
i completely understand what you talking bout on this poem

i hav a brother who i always take care of so sumtimes i feel like my life is just about taking care of him

this is a really good poem, i hope to see more works of yours :D

Chariza
06-26-2006, 07:34 AM
That's a good poem....

keep up your good work

and hope to hear some more.

:)

Daimasukí
06-26-2006, 01:19 PM
I like your poem, it's sad, but yet ....what's the word....well anyways good job and keep it up.

animeangellover
06-26-2006, 05:20 PM
you continue to make wonderful poems! keep it up!^^