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Sakura Holic
06-23-2006, 06:12 PM
This is like part II of the poem I made, Suicide (http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=44786&highlight=Poem%3A+Suicide).
So this is like part II... Hope you guys like it. ^ ^
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Blood drips out of my cut arm.
I feel on my knees,
Then Im on the floor.

Holding my last breath,
Thinking of you,
All my thoughts of you.

Blood soaked my clothes,
As I lay on the floor,
Still as a statue.

As my vision fades,
Into darkness,
Thinking of you...

Dark_Cloud-Xiao
06-23-2006, 07:08 PM
it may be a bit sad but i still love it! keep posting them please!

inuyasha_lover7089
06-23-2006, 07:12 PM
yeah keep posting

Sakura Holic
06-23-2006, 07:13 PM
Alright. I will. ^ ^
Thank You for reading my poem Dark Cloud.
And Thank You for the wonderful comment. ^ ^

LittleMomo
06-24-2006, 01:45 AM
Hope you're okay, Sakura-chan....things will get better soon, I can tell ya that. I love the poem, but it's sad.....^ ^ Keep it up

BlazingSoul
06-24-2006, 01:57 AM
The poem is really interesting. It was very unique. Good job.

animeangellover
06-24-2006, 01:01 PM
it was beautiful i enjoyed it vey much

Sakura Holic
06-24-2006, 08:51 PM
Thank You everyone, for reading my poem and commenting it. I might post another one soon.
^.~