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♥Sakura♥
06-23-2006, 06:08 PM
*Note: Not so sure I've posted this one.So bare with me.:D *



I promised you someday,
We'd be together everyday.
But as I wait right by the phone,
It seems though I'm so alone.
In this very silent room,
I'm thinking of the lies,
That will never ever die.
It's hard to figure out,
The truth that once was told.
Many,many,many nights,
I've been broken by so many lies.
You'd promise me you'd call,
All though the phone never rings.
It sits there when time flys by,
As days and months and years grow old,
I'll brake the promises that I've been told.
Ane this I PROMISE you.

By: -♥Sakura♥-

Sakura Holic
06-23-2006, 06:29 PM
It's a nice poem Sakura. Nice job. Keep up the good work.

inuyasha_lover7089
06-23-2006, 06:32 PM
very good it was nice it reminds me of me when i was still dating my ex-boyfriend william he was such a jerk but your poem was nice i like your vocabulary

♥Sakura♥
06-23-2006, 07:05 PM
_Sakura_ :Thank you for your very nice complement....

It seems like I'm talking to a twin....*giggles* Thanx again.


:groupwave

inuyasha_lover7089: Thank you also for your nice coment.

I'm not much into vocabulary things,

even though Language Arts is my main top subject

I do good at school.

I don't like it though but it's a pleasure to hear

someone like my vocabulary.Thanx once more.



I'm just bouncin' away.:bounce:Because of your coments.

inuyasha_lover7089
06-23-2006, 07:10 PM
your welcome no problem it is very nice to hear someone like my coments but every time i say something someone gives me bad rep for stupid reasons so now i have bad rep

KRPrincess24
06-23-2006, 07:19 PM
I really like the poem!!! Keep up the good work.

cherryblosmes
06-23-2006, 09:41 PM
That Was Great And Reall Good I Liked How U Said "and This I Promise U" I Like The Idea Of The Promise And That Was Awsome So Keep Posting And I'll Read Em ^.^ Uve Got Talent Keep Up The Good Work Ol :p

Yukari
06-23-2006, 10:56 PM
Very good work. Keep it up hope to see more in the furture

♥Sakura♥
06-25-2006, 01:07 PM
That's so cool thank you everyone I promise as soon as I get a nothere one I'll post a thread on one. peace out. Thank you all again.:laugh:



:groupwave



Goin' for a ride :mopedb:cause I'm so happy.

Chariza
06-26-2006, 01:53 PM
I like that poem it's good keep up ur good work and hope to read more in the future

Aleyna
06-26-2006, 03:21 PM
wut?!?!


i thought i posted on this poem too

anyways wut i sed was that i used to wait by the phone for people all the time but then that just made my life unhappy and a waste

don't let somebody who prob. doesn't care abotu u be a waste of your time

a good poem that i think lots of people can relate to i must say :)