cherryblosmes
06-23-2006, 05:16 PM
hi im back again and i dont know if this poem is good or not i hope u guys like it and that it makes to sense to yall. well enjoy
Born with Pride and Light
The light was shining
I saw it coming
I was there standing
it was marvelously touching
The atmosphere surrounding
The earth as if like it had a wing
It was something
That was worth of seeing
Even if it meant dying
It was marvelously toughing
The atmosphere surrounding
The earth as if like it had a wing
This is the best day of all living
To the earth crust shining
It was digging
It was deepening
For something it was looking
It was disappearing
From earth’s crust it was shooting
It again was appearing
It was marvelously touching
The atmosphere surrounding
The earth as if like it had wings
On the top it was carrying
Something that was delighting
It self was watching
So it wouldn’t be falling
It was marvelously touching
The atmosphere surrounding
The earth as if like it had a wing
It also was shining
With its beautifulness pounding
It was tall and sprouting
well i hope yall enjoyed it and that u yall leave comments telling me ur openiuons ( wah >.< cant ever spell) thnx for yall's time.
Born with Pride and Light
The light was shining
I saw it coming
I was there standing
it was marvelously touching
The atmosphere surrounding
The earth as if like it had a wing
It was something
That was worth of seeing
Even if it meant dying
It was marvelously toughing
The atmosphere surrounding
The earth as if like it had a wing
This is the best day of all living
To the earth crust shining
It was digging
It was deepening
For something it was looking
It was disappearing
From earth’s crust it was shooting
It again was appearing
It was marvelously touching
The atmosphere surrounding
The earth as if like it had wings
On the top it was carrying
Something that was delighting
It self was watching
So it wouldn’t be falling
It was marvelously touching
The atmosphere surrounding
The earth as if like it had a wing
It also was shining
With its beautifulness pounding
It was tall and sprouting
well i hope yall enjoyed it and that u yall leave comments telling me ur openiuons ( wah >.< cant ever spell) thnx for yall's time.