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Demon Hunter Dante
06-22-2006, 11:05 PM
I am always there to help with your sorrow...
With no one around to show appreciation...
If I am not here tomorrow...
Do you think you'll give me that attention...?

This life of mine was given to me as a borrow...
Cause i only live it as a charade...
If I am not here tomorrow...
Would you still be afraid...?

So many memories to outgrow...
All burning out like an ember...
If I am not here tomorrow...
Will I be the one you remember...?

My life is becoming even more narrow...
Seeing it come closer to it's true end...
If I am not here tomorrow...
Would you still consider me as a friend...?

Just this lonely path I follow...
With a feeling that I want to die...
If I am not here tomorrow...
Promise me you won't Ask why...!

Aleyna
06-23-2006, 01:00 AM
yay!!! dante is writing poetry!!! i always like yours works!!!

i like the line wher u used charade and ember those wer 2 very good rhymes i gotta give u props for that!!!

Kitanoru
06-23-2006, 01:05 AM
Very well done, you definately have great talent as to writing poetry, Great job man, keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the near future.

Demon Hunter Dante
06-24-2006, 04:57 PM
I wrote this a couple of days ago...I am just starting gto think that alot of people dont appreciate the things i do for them and they wont realize it till i am gone!!! It just made me feel used so i decide to write...Thanks everyone...

animeangellover
06-26-2006, 05:26 PM
well done dante, youve got quite a talent there^^

Demon Hunter Dante
06-30-2006, 02:34 AM
Thank you i am very glad you think i have a talent but i only do it every once in a while!