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Music Fiend
06-22-2006, 03:12 PM
Am I really suppose to believe,
That you’ll save yourself for me,
“Forever” is a long time, my dear,
Are you sure this is who you want to be?



“I’ll never leave your side, Chris”,
Okay, that’s all well and good,
But I’d rather have you show me your love,
You are all that I can think of.



It’s more than just flesh that you are saving,
Sexual temptation isn’t everything,
You would also be saving your soul,
Is that not a heavy toll?



Yeah, so…I do want your body,
Hehe, I’m not even going to lie,
But I truly want to be in your heart,
Aww, I wish we weren’t so far apart!



This is really getting old,
All I can do is fantasize about you,
Argh, It makes me want to scream!
I hunger for you a little too much, it seems.



Maybe you taste like honey…
Wow, now I’ve plain lost my mind!
Who could blame me, though?
My love is yearning to overflow.



So will you save yourself for me?
I guess only time will tell,
But until then, my friend,
We’ll just see this thing through to the end.



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I know it's a little silly, but I'm just no good at those depressing, "I want to die alone" poems (which I attempted, two days ago). Oh well, there it is. ^^;

Daimasukí
06-22-2006, 03:34 PM
Yeah I agree with you. Well it kinda sounded more like a statement, but anyways good job, and keep it up.

Music Fiend
06-22-2006, 04:00 PM
Yeah I agree with you. Well it kinda sounded more like a statement, but anyways good job, and keep it up.
Thanks...I think. I guess this style of poetry is more my forte, but I really did want to try something new.

teragom
06-22-2006, 04:10 PM
its kinda weird but i like it. it doesn't seem like a poem

Runescape_Rocks
06-22-2006, 04:11 PM
im not good with words but your poem it... well i relate to it

Aleyna
06-23-2006, 12:51 AM
i like your straightforwardness on this poem tehanimefreak..even tho some was alittle over the top lolz

keep up the writing :D