Eternal peace

[Knight_of_NI]

Eternal peace:
The blood of a thousand years of war fall to the
ground, the horror of the hundreds of great citys
a washed in that blood. Marching once more
to war, seeking the lost honor of death in
combat stands the unknown. To know the the
peace of death, to escape the nightmares
of hell, the bite of steel to flesh, The ground
turning to black the sound of silences filling
the air. Eternal peace in my grasp at last.

[Aleyna]

i like how u make it sound very suspensing like sumthing horrifying is going to happen but then you turn it around and he has peace that was a creative idea

u mite want to edit it tho it was kind of hard to read at 1st but then i got it the 2nd time round :rolleyes:

[Kitanoru]

wow, that is an outstanding poem you've made! I love the imagery placed in it. it really pulls the poem to life, as if it was really happening in a real life scenario, great suspense like BLOODyOrCHIDZ375 stated.You have out done me in imagery, in that one lol... ^^ Great Job! Keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing more of your poetry in the near future. ^.--