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RedShadow
06-22-2006, 02:50 PM
Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life


'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great


ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it


was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over


soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way


she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great.


She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be


popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the


team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy


would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her


parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the


entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny


asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All


right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like


she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a


pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party


was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk


by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room


filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking


that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked


another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that


he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan


started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by


a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were


right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With


all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to


stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds


they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew


that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down,


But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll


confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a


sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!"


She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a


sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble,


And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a


few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck.


Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other


car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a


wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they


gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can


do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?"


Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive


me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell


those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their


families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so


many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The


nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in


her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why


didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at


the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her


mom and dad."






This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.

Masali
06-22-2006, 02:54 PM
Cute story.

philmaster628
06-22-2006, 03:10 PM
sad story....but nice one too

Manhattan_Project_2000
06-22-2006, 03:12 PM
Do you have any proof it is true and not the product of Thought Police, because I don't trust any poem written from the view of the soon to be deceased.

Xieshunnuan
06-22-2006, 03:14 PM
I think its pretty interestin...^-^

RedShadow
06-22-2006, 03:17 PM
Do you have any proof it is true and not the product of Thought Police, because I don't trust any poem written from the view of the soon to be deceased.


Its is most likey not real but it makes the sroty more dramatic(sp)

Kristen
06-22-2006, 03:25 PM
There has never been any proof that story is true. I've seen it around since AOL '94. But every time I still get teary eyed. ;_;

Manhattan_Project_2000
06-22-2006, 03:31 PM
Its is most likey not real but it makes the sroty more dramatic(sp)
Yeah, but it makes the story less believable.

RedShadow
06-22-2006, 03:33 PM
There has never been any proof that story is true. I've seen it around since AOL '94. But every time I still get teary eyed. ;_;
Yeah you are most likey right but still don't u think it makes the ending more
Dramatic? I think it does.


(o well lets just say its fake)

Knuffle Bunny
06-22-2006, 03:39 PM
I got an e-mail like atht. It was a chain mail. Underneath that it said...
if you do not send this to 15 other people in one hour, something tragic will happen to you too. PLease reply do not forward.

Daenerys
06-22-2006, 09:52 PM
This is a story that was written in the early fifties or so, that parents told thier kids to scare them into not drinking or being out late.

This version however, is the chainletter version, which has been posted in fanfiction about ten times. Usually by someone who claims they wrote it.

My mom had heard of this story when she was growing up and so had my dad.

And they're ancient.

Faceless111
06-22-2006, 10:29 PM
Oh, how I laugh every single frickin' time I read that story.

Buruku
06-23-2006, 01:54 PM
awwww, that story gave me a warm fuzzy feeling inside. :laugh:

I'm going to keep that around for a decade and read it to my children at night.

Eris
12-06-2006, 01:08 PM
Do you have any proof it is true and not the product of Thought Police, because I don't trust any poem written from the view of the soon to be deceased.

Moreover, only a fool or an imbecile trusts something neatly typed and formatted on animeforum. It just... never happens.

RedShadow
12-06-2006, 01:11 PM
whats wrong with my typing...no i didn't copy and repost i wrote the whole thing from a website i found that wouldn't let me copy it

kyubichan
12-06-2006, 01:12 PM
I get a lot of these in my email. They go to the trash.

Eris
12-06-2006, 01:14 PM
whats wrong with my typing...no i didn't copy and repost i wrote the whole thing from a website i found that wouldn't let me copy it

What's wrong is that there is nothing wrong.

RedShadow
12-06-2006, 01:17 PM
lol, i see your ponit :)

Eris
12-06-2006, 01:23 PM
lol, i see your ponit :)

Seriously, perfect punctuation--even semicolon (used correctly as well). That doesn't happen. And the double row distance...? The text cries cut and paste so loud they can hear it Siberia.

Hamashimura
12-06-2006, 01:24 PM
I kinda like the story,but I kinda don't believe in it...But still good...

RedShadow
12-06-2006, 01:27 PM
i can give u the link to the site i got it from if i can find it and if u try it will not let u copy, it was more of a picture....like a piece of paper with writeing on it. I did write it word for word thought

Eris
12-06-2006, 01:32 PM
i can give u the link to the site i got it from if i can find it and if u try it will not let u copy, it was more of a picture....like a piece of paper with writeing on it. I did write it word for word thought

I googled for the first line, and got 270 hits, with more or less identical versions of your text.

Kewii
12-06-2006, 01:41 PM
Stories belong in fanfiction.

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