no voice

[LittleMomo]

I was just trying to help,
but I made things worse,
instead I get anger,
you cried and hugged me,
and now you leave me,
rain starts and you run away,
I cried with the rain,
because right now,
I lost my heart,
I ruined myself,
taking everything I have,
and simply destroyed it,
I sit by myself,
alone and forever will be,
as I look up,
all I see is rain,
and I will always cry,
if I ran out of tears,
then blood come in,
and all around me,
I hear nothing,
so I'm all alone,
with no voice to hear....
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[Kitanoru]

Great Poem Man!, I loved it! Keep up the great work!!

[chii-fan-lover]

nice poem jumpy.

[Aleyna]

i really like this poem lucky!!!

the part when you said she ran away in the rain was good
and i liked it when you said blood came out of your eyes, like your heart is dying and bleeding inside that was very creative you got alotta talent and potential :D

[Sakura Holic]

Excellent Poem for all Lucky. Quite Sad...But...
Lucky...I've read all your poems that you posted...Hope you feel better...You've been sad lately...

[Daenerys]

Try to do the Poem: Title thing.

Extra characters are bad.

[cherryblosmes]

Oh My God What An Awsome Poem I Loved The Part Where U Said I Cried With The Rain U Know Like The Rain Is Suffring And The Imagry As A Him And The Fact That He Was Crying As If He Lost His Loved One Too. That Was Great And Could Have Lots Of Meanings Im Truly Speechless Cuz Of How Much Good It Was. That Was Great. Plz Keep Posting That Was Awsome And I'll Keep Reading Promise ^.^ . Keep This Talent Lol :p

[Cat_Demon]

Lovely poem jump, but...why so sad? Hope you feel better, this poem made me realize some things I still have to finish in life...Nice words, made it seem like I could see it, like a visual.