I lost you...

[LittleMomo]

You leave me behind,
as I fall down,
you didn't want to pick me up,
because you hate me now,
and for what I did,
I made a big, critical mistake,
just because,
I'm afraid of something,
that will happen,
which is that you'll get angry,
but in the end,
you did anyway,
I wanted to hide these things,
but it builds up,
and in the end,
I got the pain and anger from you,
I'm sorry that,
I never once made you happy.....
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[Tsuneki]

aw this is so sad *cries* plz keep it up

[Vendetta]

Very sad...I wonder if this is truly how you feel. Anyways I give it a 7/10 some things sound funny. But then again my poems always sound funny.

[chii-fan-lover]

awww...so sad jumpy
be happy be heathly!! (dont ask that just makes me laugh)
but i still like ur poem.

[Aleyna]

lucky u seem so sad...r u sad or r u just trying a different style or tech of writing poetry???

its good anyways!!! keep writing the poetry!! :D