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LittleMomo
06-21-2006, 05:48 PM
The darkness comes in,
no matter what,
hold on to me,
even if it means,
that we'll die together,
but I'm glad I'm with you,
I don't have to feel alone,
because you're with me,
I feel safe,
darkness won't come in,
we have the power,
of love and light combined,
mixed into a new generation,
driving out the evil,
and purifying the good,
we shall stay together and happy,
so just hold on to me,
forever and always,
and together,
we'll never let in the dark.
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enjoy everybody ^ ^

chii-fan-lover
06-21-2006, 05:51 PM
nice poem jumpy ^^

Vendetta
06-21-2006, 05:52 PM
NIce poem But, I think you ment to write 'to' but you wrote 'tp'!

LittleMomo
06-21-2006, 05:54 PM
thanks for pointing that out, me sowies everyone

cherryblosmes
06-23-2006, 05:00 PM
That Was Great And Meaningful I Hope U Become The Best Poet Ever In The Plant That Was Awsome Lucky. Plz Keep Posting And Dont Lose The Talent Cause U Got Talent Lol ^.^

Aleyna
06-24-2006, 09:58 PM
its sounds very suspensing but somehow sad

i liked it though, somehow your descriptions made me think of you and your lover as a holy graile like in indiana jones wher if somebody picked the wrong cup they'd die...u prob. don't know wut im talking bout lol ill stop rambling on :laugh: