mind is mixed

[LittleMomo]

I feel so weird,
it feels like,
that I have,
another person,
inside me,
my feelings,
are mixed,
one's sad,
another's mad,
then there's happy,
and more feelings,
all at the same time,
as if that other person,
wants to come out,
I fear of that happening,
either that,
or my mind has a lot of things up....
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Idk....but anyway enjoy

[chii-fan-lover]

nice poem jumpy! ^^
me likes all ur poems!
there fun to read.

[Daenerys]

Just a suggestion, to make them feel less broken, add less linebreaks. =D

[LittleMomo]

Thanks Princess Ai, this was just short because I ran out of ideas XP I will work on that.

[yami hatake]

It surprises me how quickly poems come to you!!It was a good poem..~yami

[Daenerys]

Well Poem's don't have to be any set length. They can be short too.

[~fullmetal_homunculiII~]

Thats a good poem. thanks for posting that. It inspired me to do what i do best, DRAW!not very many things do that