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LittleMomo
06-20-2006, 08:35 PM
You grab my hand,
taking me out of the dark,
you held me close,
as our hearts form as one,
I wrap my arms around you,
as you do the same,
for how long this will last,
who knows, maybe forever,
but one thing is for sure,
is that I'm always with you,
no matter where you go,
no matter how long you'll be gone,
I'm always with you,
and you'll always be in my heart,
because even if we are close,
it doesn't matter,
just as long as I'm with you,
and you're with me,
I know, that things will be okay,
that I would feel more safe,
as if it was paradise,
thank you, for everything....

Cat_Demon
06-20-2006, 09:07 PM
Great poem jump! I loved it, had great meaning to it.

-Kitty

yami hatake
06-20-2006, 09:16 PM
What a beautiful poem..http://animegalleries.net/bbs/images/smilies/redface.gif it brings back memories..great poem!!
I can't wait to see morehttp://animegalleries.net/bbs/images/smilies/laugh.gif ~yami

Sakura Holic
06-20-2006, 09:17 PM
aw...its a great poem lucky.
It's so sweet. I love it.
I hope you write more.