The Beautiful Breakdown

[Music Fiend]

I knew you weren’t faithful,
It was all a lie,
Take this bullet,
Let me die, again…
Never should’ve let you in.



You took a good guy,
And you broke him down,
Stabbed me in the back,
Laughing at my pain…
Your hands bloodstained.



Your kisses are tainted,
I’m not your fool,
You never did love me,
I’m not your tool...
But you’re so damn cool.



I knew you would kill me,
But have no fear,
I’m in Hell,
And I’ll bring you here,
Alive…you’ll be by my side.



Am I crazy? No,
I should just let you go,
I’ll just burn alone,
And end this show,
Right now…I’m going down.



You’ll miss me baby,
And you know it’s true,
I’m getting my revenge,
And it’s long overdue,
But I can’t deny…I still love you.




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Well, there you go. It's a little confusing, but I guess it's an okay poem. I kinda rushed it, though...

[Vendetta]

I really like it except the 'but, your so cool part' Other than that it's great!

[Music Fiend]

Thanks. I did it in 30 minutes, so I couldn't think up anything better to rhyme with tool than "cool". Ah well, I appreciate the criticism.

[Ayame_Sohma]

Hello

I think your poem was really nice and i love readin it

Ayame xx

[Aleyna]

awww that was such a good poem!!!

i always enjoy ready your rhyming poems tehanimefreak!!!

lol the last stanza is the best...i liked it how you made it depressed but then turned in around...like it was a suprise!! :D