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TodayIsMine
06-20-2006, 01:40 PM
Like opening a fresh box of cereal

I've found my toy inside.


Cracking ice cubes with warm water

A girl draped in lights.


Today I fantasized

In endless awe.

A paper plate with a feast that only love could cook for me.

An image of a woman in a white-walled, leather couch clad appartment room.

Third floor...or fourth.

Mine.


A girl, a woman, light.

A love, to hold me tight.

A cloud

A fictitious whirlwind of emotion

Very real.

Independent individual...

Suddenly I can feel.

Daenerys
07-03-2006, 01:08 AM
The title was very misleading. It reminds me of a brigh eyes song. Short but full of meaning.

TodayIsMine
07-17-2006, 09:43 PM
Thank you very much Ai

Amaruk
07-17-2006, 09:46 PM
That was really good!! keep writing!!

cherryblosmes
07-17-2006, 09:46 PM
that was really good keep posting i loved it. and i like all images they were really good ^^

Ωmega
07-17-2006, 09:47 PM
The title was very misleading. It reminds me of a brigh eyes song. Short but full of meaning.I totally agree. It was nicely organized, and easy to understand...if it were a song Im sure it would be easy on the ears, which is nice.
Though...the title is kinda misleading...how did you come up with the title?

TodayIsMine
07-17-2006, 09:48 PM
Thanks everyone, nice of you all to notice the imagery...I actually worked reall hard on this love song sorta thing here because I meant it fully...this one really really counts lol.

I came up with the title when I imagined what I am saying...it turns out I'm in love and I'm sort of dripping out the emotion, as would a faucet. My titles mean nothing to people, only I understand them most of the time lol...but thank you for asking, it made me think of the girl again...who, by the way, is very in love with me too lol.