heartbroken

[Ayame_Sohma]

I am lost and really confusedI




I don't know whether I feel loved or used
I cared so much just for you
But now I've realized what you do
You take girls hearts and tear them up
You act as if you've had enough
Well I have a few more things to say
And that is, it's all coming back your way.

You can act all tough
As if you don't care
But I know that deep down you are really scared
I've had enough of the way u treat me
It will now be your turn to leave.

Now that you know that there is not hope
You are finding it difficult to cope
I loved you like a brother at the start
But you have now broken my heart

[Vendetta]

I really know how you feel! I think it's very good considering that it's not an all ryhming poem. Although, it's not that good when you reaplace 'you' for 'u' in poetry. Good job I want to see more!

[BlazingSoul]

That was interesting and good at the same time. I give it a thumbs up.