The Cave

[Fuu Kasumi]

The Cave~

The cave grows dim,
As I hear this hymn.
The tune inside my head,
It won't go to bed.
I cry out in vain,
For I can feel your pain.
As I dwell in this cave,
And dig your grave.
Soon the night falls,
And I hear distant calls..
Calls of the souls, Forever lost.

Tell me what you think. >.>

[Dark_Cloud-Xiao]

it's way better than anything i could do. keep posting them

[animeangellover]

interesting poem i got into it

[Fuu Kasumi]

Oh em gee! xD

Finally someone else posted something. <33
Thanks a bunch. ^_^ Glad you both [liked] it.

[Yukari]

Very sad but I like it. It flows very well. Very good. Keep it up