filled with sadness

[KikyoJ0627]

filled with sadness is what i am
my eyes burn with fresh tears and
my heart aches with a fresh wound
i guess i thought wrong and misplaced my trust
i put it in you and now theres no us
and the scene is all that plays in my head as i
look into the star filled sky
choking,holding back tears and the wind whispers
through my ears and the word why is running through my head
now i look dead ahead with no more trust and nomore softness
to show because all you left me with was sadness and revenge!

[Fuu Kasumi]

Hey. That's a nice poem, yet it's sad. Keep up the great writting. ^.~

[Dark_Cloud-Xiao]

i'll admit it is a bit sad and maybe depressing to people, but i still like it! please keep posting more!

[animeangellover]

nice poem! i liked it alot! but its a little sad

[Yukari]

Very sad I hope you feel better but the poem was great. I liked it

[KikyoJ0627]

This poem was inspired by Kikyo and Inuyasha's relationship/situation yet somehow i guess i do relate to it too

[Astalle]

Good poem. Keep up the good work.

[DarkMoonPrince]

This is very good, I want to see more of your writing. ^^