Aleyna
06-14-2006, 12:17 PM
ok i was just experimenting with this poem, check out my other poem ECHO! ECHO! Rewind~*GLiCh~gLIcH~
A Remark's Situation
foolishness,
like getting brutally clubbed,
with a baseball bat,
right in the lower back,
the center of your spine,
like getting whipped,
about a bazillion times,
but your used to it,
so you let it manipulate,
to tire you out emotionally,
your eyes need to shut though,
you desprately need a nap,
a time to rejuvenate self esteem,
then to perkishly wake up,
rise and shine to another horrid!
but prepared and ready,
to out do foolish traps today,
with a triumphet losing streak,
but in remark's situations,
of winning acknowledging wisdom~
A Remark's Situation
foolishness,
like getting brutally clubbed,
with a baseball bat,
right in the lower back,
the center of your spine,
like getting whipped,
about a bazillion times,
but your used to it,
so you let it manipulate,
to tire you out emotionally,
your eyes need to shut though,
you desprately need a nap,
a time to rejuvenate self esteem,
then to perkishly wake up,
rise and shine to another horrid!
but prepared and ready,
to out do foolish traps today,
with a triumphet losing streak,
but in remark's situations,
of winning acknowledging wisdom~