These Are the Feelings

[Demon Hunter Dante]

A relationship that was not to long.
Given no time to make it grow strong.
Maybe the two of us just don't belong.
These are the feelings when it all goes wrong.
The tears, the fears, and no help from your peers.
These are the feelings that are here.
Happiness, Passion, and the love I hold dear.
Those were the feelings that were never near.
The more I think about this makes me wanna cry.
These tears i shed makes me wanna die.
I only wish away from this world I could fly.
These are the feelings when your living a lie.
When all this happened I can admit I was mad.
But now that I think I am only sad.
Maybe this decision can make you glad.
Because these are the feelings when you think of what you could've had.

[Aleyna]

u r very good at rhyming!!! sounds like u could be a good song writer!!! i wanna see more works of yours :D

[Demon Hunter Dante]

With this one i wrote about a week long relationship i had with a girl that i thought liked me...

[animeangellover]

nice poem! you make rhyming seem so easy!^^;

[Yukari]

Very sad *cry* It ws very well writen though. It flowed very well

[Demon Hunter Dante]

Thank you very much...It is not that easy as it seems to make these rhyme!!! But i try thank you...If you like this one read my others just look for them! They are posted!

[Saisashi~Arashi]

Great poem. Very well written. *Reps* =) Hope to see more work.

[Demon Hunter Dante]

Like i said i have alot of my poems posted just go to my profile and click "Find all threads started by Demon Hunter Dante" and look there!!!

[Chariza]

That poem alsmost made me cry...keep up the good work I can't wait to read more.

[Demon Hunter Dante]

Wow my poem has never touched anyone like that...No one has ever cried

[Kiss of Death]

I JUST LOVE IT! keep a good work

[kiba_white_wolf]

hey....nice poem....is sooo sad.....n ur good at rhyming.....hope to see more of ur poems.....