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LittleMomo
06-10-2006, 09:04 PM
I loved you,
and cared for you,
but the results are the same,
you hated me,
you get mad at me,
by turning your rage on me,
I'm giving it all,
my love, my everything,
but you shattered it,
you continue to hurt me,
until I cried in the corner,
sitting in the dark,
then you ask for forgiveness,
but all I wanted,
is for you to say I love you,
all I can do is forgive you,
but will you keep this up?
Or will I leave you....
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this poem is a story about a person who truely loves another person, but his or her lover gets mad, then asks for forgivenes....enjoy

chii-fan-lover
06-10-2006, 09:08 PM
awwwwww..... that sad
but its an awsome poem
i really like it jumpy.

hyperanimeperson
06-10-2006, 09:10 PM
that was relly werd but cool to.

Cat_Demon
06-10-2006, 09:17 PM
nice poem jump, i like it.

Saisashi~Arashi
06-10-2006, 09:43 PM
Nice poem. Good job luck.

Sakura Holic
06-10-2006, 09:46 PM
Aw. It's so cute!
Nice poem Lucky.
^ ^

Aminity
06-11-2006, 03:57 AM
Awww.. a sad poem. :(
But very well written. :)

animeangellover
06-26-2006, 06:04 PM
AWWWW! that was really cute!^^