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Cat_Demon
06-10-2006, 08:37 PM
This poem is about a relationship that didn't work out. Hope you all like it
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Why must love hurt so much?
Why does nothing ever go right?
The person I gave my heart to,
He tore it apart,
As if it was a joke,

Why must love cause me so much pain?
The cause of my tears,
Of all my hate,

I thought you loved me,
But I was a fool not to see,
All the pain you have caused me,

A wake up to reality,
How could I have fell for someone so hard,

Why did I even say yes to you?
Why must I always be in so much pain?
Why must I cry so damn much?

What did I do to deserve this?
I guess its my fault for letting you in,

Time to get over things,
Time to go back to reality,
I'm an unloved person,
Who's just a fool,

Time to end this story,
Unhappily ever after...

Cat Guy
06-10-2006, 08:42 PM
Nice poem cat, i like it alot. Can't wait for more

Cat_Demon
06-10-2006, 09:33 PM
thanks i just fixed the spelling errors. ^^

Aminity
06-11-2006, 03:59 AM
A powerful poem. Kinda makes me sad. :(
That means it's damn well written. ^_^

Dr.McDoom!
06-11-2006, 04:35 AM
Nice job. Though, i think someone's forgetting Rhyme and Reason!
Reps for you, however ^^

night_inuyasha
06-11-2006, 10:50 PM
Reps for you. it was good i hope u write more.

Fox Demon
06-11-2006, 11:03 PM
Nice poem Cat-Cat, I hope to see more from your talented self. See you around girl.

-Fox

Aleyna
06-11-2006, 11:32 PM
that poem seriously almost made me cry...i must soudn really stupid
but i completely understand it cuz i hav gone thorugh a phase like that with my ex bf sean
i realised though after a long time of being bitter from him that it was a huge waist
you shouldn't cry over sum1 who never cared bout u
ther not worth your tears or your time being sad over wen u could hav a better time being happy and getting on with a happier start in your life
it took me a long time to figure this out cuz i was too upset to wake up and relise the positive things in reality

Anime_Otaku
07-30-2006, 12:17 PM
Good job on the poem, i liked it alot