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LittleMomo
06-10-2006, 08:22 PM
Just when you thought,
it was going to be the end,
Just when you think,
that life is just lame,
I'll lend you my hand,
and help you,
with my guiding light,
darkness won't come in,
I'll prevent them,
even if it has to sacrifice my life,
I'm giving my all,
I won't give up on you all,
I'll block the hits you all take,
I stand in front of the dark,
but one thing that made me happy,
is that you are all safe,
so I smile gently,
and think all of you,
before I don't see all of you....anymore
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My friends, no matter what happens, I'll protect you all, giving my all to cheer you all on, even if I'm far away! ^ ^

Sakura Holic
06-10-2006, 08:26 PM
Its a nice poem Lucky. I really Love it.
^ ^
Hope you make more. I love your poems.

Cat_Demon
06-10-2006, 08:27 PM
nice poem jump, shows you got a lot of talent.

chii-fan-lover
06-10-2006, 08:32 PM
poems poems poems!!!!
i love poems!! and i love yr poems!
they rulez jumpy! ^^

Saisashi~Arashi
06-10-2006, 10:20 PM
great poem again. <3

LittleMomo
06-10-2006, 10:54 PM
thank you, all of you ^ ^

Aminity
06-11-2006, 03:55 AM
Skillfully written poem, as always! :)
I liked it a lot.

Dr.McDoom!
06-11-2006, 04:57 AM
Nice one, Lucky! Just reading the begining made a cool starter music play in my mind ^_^;
Theheh, rep_for_luck23 (i can't give 77, lol)

Martherus
06-11-2006, 08:53 AM
Oh, such a sweet poem <33
You're friends musst be very lucky to have a friend like you ^^

Taking_Lifes
06-11-2006, 10:29 AM
nice poem jump.
its really good.
i would give u rep if i knew how.
but still i like the poem.

Daenerys
06-11-2006, 10:47 PM
There were a lot of spammy replies in this post. How can I tell they were spammy replies? They were shorter and less descriptive than this reply.

Aleyna
06-11-2006, 11:44 PM
aww thats a really sweet poem u got a good heart

keep writing those poems i wanna see more! :D

Fox Demon
06-12-2006, 12:49 AM
Wow! This is the first poem I have read of yours and I am indeed liking the way of your writing. I think you did a good job on putting your words together, your work reminds me of CD's a little (cat_demon) It looks like you put hard work into this poem, I enjoyed reading it.