Technical Difficulties

[Ωmega]

You say you love me (unknown data)
You tell me you need me (error)
And that you only have eyes for me (malfunction)

:: system error ::
:: automatic reboot ::
:: reinstalling data ::

You make me feel special (program error)
You give me everything I need (unknown data)
And one day you'll make me your bride (error)


:: system error ::
:: automatic reboot ::
:: reinstalling data ::

I love you more than anything (program error)
I need you more than anything (virus detected)
And I only have eyes for you (terminating virus)

:: virus terminated ::
:: automatic reboot ::
:: reinstalling data ::

.................................................. .........

:: unable to reinstall ::
:: harddrive has crashed ::


-Fin-

[BlazingSoul]

The computer terms made it unique but the poem is very good.

[Ωmega]

Its basically about internet love...and the computer acts as the girls conscience (kinda)
I figured it would be nicer with computer terms instead of 'liar' 'pedophile' and what not
The poem has tons of emotional layers to it...but Im not gonna get into all that =)

[Ωmega]

*sigh* I really hate to double post, but I need this bumped.
It would be nice if you all would leave some c-n-c after reading....pwease?

[Aleyna]

before i say wut i was gonna say...don't double post! u can get in trouble for that, believe me i already hav gotten a warning n i don't want u or anybody else too
lol srry anyways wut i was gonna say is u hav a very unique n creative style of writing poetry!!! i like it alot! u should keep posting more! :D

[Ωmega]

Well, Ive been here for over a year, so I know what the rules on double posting...Anyway, I wrote this years ago...it was supposed to be for a band that was never formed (heh, childhood)
So, anymore comments and criticism?

[Music Fiend]

Well, it's ceretainly an interesting poem. I do like the computer terminology that put in there...that was a nice touch. I liked it, overall.

[Ωmega]

Heh, thanks. I like to be different =3
Although, I wish I knew better computer error terms