Sinner, Do Your Worst

[TodayIsMine]

Corruption envelopes my thoughts

But I made sure to brush my teeth today.

One step...


The printer took hours to print me

One page of that sheet that I needed hours ago.

Closer to...


My eyes are shifting uncontrollably

And I don't know how to stop them without needles.

Complete and...


Destruction faces me and tells me his plans

And I laugh to show that I'm not afraid, but tears fall.

Utter...


Too bad for that city that I tried to demolish.

They must have all been screaming and crying before I...

Insanity...


Before I...


Decided to...


One step closer to complete and utter insanity.


Stop...

[Yugure's Goddess]

Me likes! *gives thumbs up* You better be a poet someday (if you're not already).

You are really good. nice food for thought in all the poems of yours that i've read!

love
dani
dude

[TodayIsMine]

Thank you

[Fei Ling]

Nice poem Flamio! Very nice. Here's some cup cakes for ya! *gives cupcakes then claps*

[TodayIsMine]

Thanks Fei

[Megaman Zero X]

again very nice. you will some day become a poet

[TodayIsMine]

Hahaha...Maybe Megaman...maybe someday! lol.

[Zoma the Forsaken]

Wow that poem is awesome or BEAST!!

[TodayIsMine]

As much as I hate it when people call things "beast", I accept your compliment. Thank you.

[Masali]

Excellent, sir. Very Excellent. Normally, I'd disapprove of the use of the verse's end to create a message, it was expertly executed. Rhythm Was write on. Consistent, Flowing, Easy to read. Very good work. I also adore the concept, It convey's an awesome message. I can't think of anything as of now that I would suggest improving on. Just keep doing what you're doing.

[Death Blade]

this is pretty good what kind of poem is it

[TodayIsMine]

Hah...so now I'm a "sir" eh Masali? lol. It's nice to see you're giving me good feedback. You have been for a little while now i believe, since my last few poems (before I took a break from the site). I guess I can say the same to you; keep doing what you're doing ;) lol. Thanks man