Why you left me

[Sailor Lunar Eclipse]

I saw you walk away from me,
You used to laugh
You used to sing
You used to tell me you loved me.

Now I'm waiting here for you,
For you I laugh
For you I sing
For you is who I say I love.

I remember your smile,
I remember your laugh,
I remember the way you would say you loved me.
I remember it all.

The Moonrise
The Skylights

I wish you were here standing next to me,
As I see my life fade away
As I see who I have become
and why you went away...

I'm sorry, please return to me.
Tell me It was all a dream...
Tell me... that you love me...

This is dedicated to a really good friend, Please forgive me my dear friend,
Please remembe rI'll always be waiting and wishing.

[suky]

It's a great poem kid. I really love it but I think that on 'you usto tell me you loved me' you'd put 'that' in between 'tell', but it your poem and I'd give it a 10 anyway, well keep it up and don't give up writing........*looks down with sadness striking her face*.......like I did, for which only in your writing you can truely be free, let your mind wonder in to the emptiness of nowhere, but everywhere, where ideas are like flowers in a medow, that you can pick them up with suck beauty and elegance and eternity is not a option but fabulous faith.

[Aminity]

Very well done. :)
This type of poems make me a bit sad but in a good way. :)
When you find the inspiration please write more.

[LINK the swordsman]

wow that was good i wish i was good at writing poems! *pulls out a pen and paper* roses are red voilets are blue.......dam i am not good at poems but really great poems you should my a book and publish them!

[Daenerys]

Don't rate poems, never have I allowed that. Only rate if the author asks you to.

Deleted all the spammy replies.

[dna_angel]

you know, i had read some of your poems... and all of them are so great!
keep up the good work. hope to read all your poems.

[EMO-cuts]

thats a really kewl poem ^ ^ luv it
hope to see more <3

[Aleyna]

this is a good poem!

me like it very very much! :p

i like the verse the Moonrise, the Skylights the best for some reason, it sounds mysterious and cool

[BlazingSoul]

Wow that poem is great. But who is it for?

[inuyasha_lover7089]

nice poem i bet your friend will be really proud of you