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Sailor Lunar Eclipse
05-30-2006, 09:57 PM
I have wandered far and wide,
I have searched for what to hide.

I have have spoken many things,
I have listened to his wings.

I have followed with no fear,
I have wondered why I'm here.

I have hoped for something true,
I have stopped and then I flew.

I have waited for the moon,
I have wished that it'll end soon.

I have danced on shallow ground,
I have lost what can't be found.

I have never broken mine,
I have wanted to decline.

Yukari
05-30-2006, 10:02 PM
I love the poem. I want to see more of your work. Keep it up

LINK the swordsman
05-30-2006, 11:23 PM
wow rhyme scyme poem thats very hard to pull off! wow your really go at this ha ha ha write more thats a great poem

inuyasha_lover7089
05-30-2006, 11:29 PM
yes very good i would like to see more of your work Inuyasha lives forever you can not kill him

Aminity
05-31-2006, 06:35 AM
It might be possible to turn that into a song.. hee :)
Nice job! I look forward to seeing more of your work. :)

Sailor Lunar Eclipse
05-31-2006, 06:56 AM
hehe...

Funny I didn't even noticed it rymned...
I was thinking about turning it into a song... but I'm still not sure

And thank you!

(oh and Link did kill Inuyasha)

BlazingSoul
05-31-2006, 09:11 AM
Wow, you're getting really good. Bravo!!*applauds*