LittleMomo
05-09-2006, 07:57 PM
My poems are slipping,
somehow I got to make it good,
good like it was a brand new car,
it has to flow better,
like a river flowing steadily,
I need more time in my poems,
if I don't, it doesn't do any good,
It needs to be perfect everytime,
like it was first place in a game,
my poems are slowly going downhill,
as if a bike is going down from a steep hill,
Will I ever make a good poem?
or will I get the same comments over and over,
who knows until I make another one,
I'll improve so don't worry,
I just need more time, that's all.
-----------------------------
Done, and enjoy ^ -^
somehow I got to make it good,
good like it was a brand new car,
it has to flow better,
like a river flowing steadily,
I need more time in my poems,
if I don't, it doesn't do any good,
It needs to be perfect everytime,
like it was first place in a game,
my poems are slowly going downhill,
as if a bike is going down from a steep hill,
Will I ever make a good poem?
or will I get the same comments over and over,
who knows until I make another one,
I'll improve so don't worry,
I just need more time, that's all.
-----------------------------
Done, and enjoy ^ -^