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Sailor Lunar Eclipse
05-07-2006, 03:02 PM
"The moon is something nobody sees"





The moon is something no one sees.
No one notices,
No one believes.

It’s just like a star in the great, vast sky.
So many to see,
Is it too high?

How is it so dark when it is so light?
The moon is so pretty,
The moon is so bright.

But no one sees the beauty within.
Why is it hard?
Why can’t it win?

No one seems to understand why,
The moon controls water,
The moon controls tides.

Now what do you think of when you see the moon?
Do you see the end?
Is it coming soon?

wolf-on-the-hunt
05-07-2006, 03:21 PM
........that is so touching..........i luv it luv it luv it!!!!so cool i should post some of mine tooB)

Fei Ling
05-12-2006, 03:19 AM
That is such a nice poem Sailor Lunar Eclipse!
Keep it up and hope to see more of your works!

bafflequeen
05-12-2006, 05:35 AM
that's a very interesting poem
nice job! keep it up!

Trinity Muse
05-14-2006, 02:16 AM
-Applaud.- Wowzerz.. I love it! <3 Nice work, Sailor Lunar Eclipse. Keep it up. ^_^

ZG~

BlazingSoul
05-14-2006, 06:14 AM
Your poem is great*claps hands*. It's beautiful and I give it two thumbs up.:D

Dr.McDoom!
05-14-2006, 07:19 AM
Heh, nice one! *claps hands*

DemonToaster
05-15-2006, 11:53 AM
Hmmm. Nice poem. Not sure I can think of anything else to say...