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LittleMomo
05-03-2006, 10:31 PM
You don't know,
how much I I'm feeling,
this hurts,
right here in my heart,
I care for others,
I loved them so much,
but all you give me,
is your hatred,
you lied to me,
and I trusted you,
why do you hurt me?
you played with my mind,
and said fake kisses,
gave me fake love,
you just don't know,
that I am crying inside....
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Note: this is not what I'm feeling right now.

Daimasukí
05-04-2006, 05:57 PM
..................good poem.......keep....it up...

_CTA_
05-05-2006, 04:32 AM
awww... its a sad one...well is it true? are u sad? well i hope ur going to be well soon!! i like the poem btw daisuke-kun (wth of course ur poems are wonderful!!)

bafflequeen
05-05-2006, 07:50 PM
that's a very sad poem but it's great
nice job! keep it up!