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LittleMomo
04-27-2006, 11:17 PM
I'm always there for you,
yet you don't talk to me,
you simply just go,
by leaving me,
I cared for you,
I even love you,
but you just stand there,
like it was my fault,
you run away from me,
with tears,
I didn't do anything,
I tried to love you,
and talk to you,
but you're quiet,
by simply saying I'm busy,
logging off,
when you're actually stil on,
I see through the lies,
within my mind,
I can't believe,
that you don't want to talk to me.
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Enjoy, ^-^

Daimasukí
04-28-2006, 12:38 AM
I sincerly say that I'm deeply touched, by this poem. Good job on rhyming it and making sense at the same time. I'd give it a 10 out of 10 great job! and keep it up!

anime_pnoi
04-28-2006, 12:40 AM
hey thats pretty good...u make it up yurself?

LittleMomo
04-28-2006, 06:20 PM
I always make my poems by myself. Some of the poems I make are for others, some are just to learn something. ^-^ It's kinda hard, because you want your poem to make sense.

furuba4ever
04-28-2006, 06:50 PM
It is a preety good poem. the rhyming was cool, but I have to say that it isn't my absoulute favorite though to me, it seems a lil bit cliche, but that might just be me. :sofa:
''by simply saying I'm busy,
logging off,
when you're actually stil on,''