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Vendetta
04-27-2006, 04:49 PM
I'm weak on the inside,

My weakness I must hide,

I try to keep my composure,

Go ahead, Call me a poser,

None of you know how I feal,

No one knows me, For real,

Inside, my mind is dying,

Outside, My body is lying.





I'm weak on the inside,

My weakness I must hide,

I'm truly a child, So innocent,

To grow up, Was never ment,

At night I hold my teddy bear,

At the wall, I stare.




I'm weak on the inside,

My weakness I must hide,

I try to hold my tears back,

That strength, I greatly lack,

I may not appear to be so weak,

But listen to these words I speak,

"I'm weak on the inside,

My Emotion, I forever hide"

YoKu
04-27-2006, 04:52 PM
That is a really good poem! kinda sad, but really good.:D

Vendetta
04-28-2006, 11:14 AM
Thank you. I noiced that my poetry has been losing its 'touch'. I have decided to 'retire' from my poetry. I will only right it when I am feeling deeply sad/happy. My frist peoms where better than some of these. Because I poured all of my emotion into them. So, don't be expecting oo many more poems. Anyways, yes It is sad. but, it is true. al my friends think i am tough, and I don't need friendship/love. But, really all I want is love. Something I've missed out on for a long time now.

Evangeline
04-28-2006, 09:56 PM
Nice poem Vendetta, I like it! ^_^

Daimasukí
04-29-2006, 12:51 PM
Really great job, I'll give it a 10 out of 10, retire? why? you seem like a great poet, but I understand, anyways great poem and I would really like to see you keep going with your poetry.