I feel the love

[LittleMomo]

I feel your love,
even you're not here,
you touch me all over,
most of all,
you want me,
I'm coming towards you love,
as I run to the fields of love,
wrapping my arms around you,
because you make me feel,
like I was an angel,
so light with my wings,
spreading it to protect you,
while I kiss you,
in the shining starlight,
where it's just you and me,
dancing in the moon,
I feel the love,
from both of us,
we should stay like this,
forever, with no one disturbing.
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Have fun reading it ^-^

[furuba4ever]

YES! I'm the first one! I like how you said you were an angel, it made the mood more.. romantic.

[Music Fiend]

Another good poem, but make sure that you are limiting your mistakes, like this one: ~"as I run to this lovely fields"~. You can take more time to check over a poem, and increase the quality of your poems, even if it means decreasing the quantity of your poems. I know you have a lot to say, and what you say in your poems is usually very passionate and emotional, but I believe that you can be even better, my friend!

Good job! ^_^

[LittleMomo]

Another good poem, but make sure that you are limiting your mistakes, like this one: ~"as I run to this lovely fields"~. You can take more time to check over a poem, and increase the quality of your poems, even if it means decreasing the quantity of your poems. I know you have a lot to say, and what you say in your poems is usually very passionate and emotional, but I believe that you can be even better, my friend!

Good job! ^_^Thanks, I'll improve on it somehow! ^-^

[~Shadow~Wolf~]

Nice poem