Hopeful love

[LittleMomo]

I look up at the sky,
and all I see is love,
it wants me to have love,
it doesn't want me to give up,
I hope that my heart,
won't get tricked by darkness,
love wants me,
to have a happy and caring lover,
who not only cares for me,
but is always happy,
every time I'm here for her,
I won't give up on love,
I'll wait for her,
so I'll just look at the sunset,
and think about you,
because I love you,
and I care for you,
you cared for me too,
we both know each other,
we know how we feel everyday,
all we need is a bit of hope and faith,
and I hope that love will give me hope.
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Enjoy my poems of hope. ^-^

[3BladeDemoness]

Omgawd that was soo sweet ^.^ You can almost imagine the voices calling, I adored that jump, please PM me when you write a new one!! <3 <3 <3

[bafflequeen]

that's an awesome poem
nice job!

[Music Fiend]

Ugh, I give up! I can not compare to the great Jump_for_luck. Nice poem, my friend. Good length and some impressive imagery. Yep...*goes to his corner*

[LittleMomo]

Ugh, I give up! I can not compare to the great Jump_for_luck. Nice poem, my friend. Good length and some impressive imagery. Yep...*goes to his corner*My friend, all you have to do to make your poems great is that let all of your emotion out. ^-^ I let my love out, my anger, etc. Anyway, I'll make another poem soon!

[Music Fiend]

My friend, all you have to do to make your poems great is that let all of your emotion out. ^-^ I let my love out, my anger, etc. Anyway, I'll make another poem soon!


Oh, I know, I was just playin' with you. I've made quite a few poems, actually. I just don't bother with posting them in Fan-Fic, unless I feel like its not a waste of time.

Oh great, another poem. Just kiddin', I can't wait.

[Vendetta]

Good poem, But I don't think you should start lines with the word, "and" I don't know, I just don't think it shounds good, But it is your poem so do as you please. Keep writing 'em!

[Mamimi Maromi]

Nice poem..!!!I give it a 9.0 out of 10 WOO!Goodjob,keep up the excellent work!If only I could write poems.....Oh well! ^_^

[S o l o]

nice. i like it... hope i get to see some more

[furuba4ever]

I like this one! very hopeful in the subject of love.