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LittleMomo
04-25-2006, 09:42 PM
I wait,
for someone to get me,
to hold me tight,
but for now,
I stare in the window,
and weep at the moon,
but not only I cry for love,
I wait for it,
dreams will come true,
very soon,
I just know,
that someone loves me,
who is also hoping,
the same dream as me,
and maybe,
it might be destiny,
that we will love each other,
forever til the rest of our lives.
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Enjoy everyone!

furuba4ever
04-25-2006, 09:50 PM
how sad, and hopeful at the same time. very beautiful!

LittleMomo
04-25-2006, 10:24 PM
Thank you for your compliments, it's just that I'm trying to make my poems have deeper meaning, but it's not working...

bluesoul
04-25-2006, 11:52 PM
It is working!! Its a really nice poem with good meaning. I dont think theres anything wrong with it cuz its really good.

furuba4ever
04-27-2006, 10:42 PM
I think it's good, because it does have a good meaning, it's like a longing for love. I agree with Bluesoul.

Daimasukí
04-28-2006, 12:32 AM
It's very deep and has a lot of love mixed with sorrow, which makes it bitter sweet. Great job! and keep it up on the hard work, and remember if it comes from the heart it's all ready perfect.