Music Fiend
04-25-2006, 09:35 PM
Hello, my love
How are you today
Looking beautiful, as always
Like a moon-lit bay
You don't know me very well
And yet, we are in love
That love...so unpredictable
As if sent from above
My eyes are watching you
Passion-filled and wide
As I gaze upon my angel
Emotions welling up inside
This love is unpredictable
Of that I can be sure
But just lend me your heart, for eternity
My love is forever yours
I do not care what other people say
How we are “going too fast”
What is the point of life,
If you cannot make it last
So, I will live each day to the fullest
With my angel by my side
Yes, my unpredictable love,
You make life worth the ride
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Author Notes: This is for my girlfriend, and special lady! When you read this, know that I truly love you.
Please feel free to provide some honest, constructive criticism. I know this poem isn't perfect, so I'll appreciate any tips or pointers! ^_^
EDIT: Oww, think you for reading this, my love. Glad it made you feel special!
How are you today
Looking beautiful, as always
Like a moon-lit bay
You don't know me very well
And yet, we are in love
That love...so unpredictable
As if sent from above
My eyes are watching you
Passion-filled and wide
As I gaze upon my angel
Emotions welling up inside
This love is unpredictable
Of that I can be sure
But just lend me your heart, for eternity
My love is forever yours
I do not care what other people say
How we are “going too fast”
What is the point of life,
If you cannot make it last
So, I will live each day to the fullest
With my angel by my side
Yes, my unpredictable love,
You make life worth the ride
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Author Notes: This is for my girlfriend, and special lady! When you read this, know that I truly love you.
Please feel free to provide some honest, constructive criticism. I know this poem isn't perfect, so I'll appreciate any tips or pointers! ^_^
EDIT: Oww, think you for reading this, my love. Glad it made you feel special!