happy and peaceful

[LittleMomo]

In my world,
there's a happy,
and a perfect relationship,
no chaos,
just a peacful place,
a lot of love everywhere,
there's always,
a kiss every second,
not a fight at all,
love is everywhere,
in my world,
and in that world of mine,
there's happiness,
no sadness, just a wonderful place,
who cares if others think it's lame,
but at least,
there's no war,
just a hold-in hand,
and a kiss-to-kiss,
just a happy and peaaceful place,
where I usually go to.
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Happy readings everyone! ^-^

[Lilium Filix]

Hm, this poem makes me think of my dreams (a.k.a La La Land) ^^
Very well written poem, I can tell you put your own feelings and perspective into this.
Keep up the good work. ^~

~The Angel has spoken~
~AEK~

[LittleMomo]

Why thank you! ^-^ I am making hope and love poems ^-^ ANother one soon!

[Vendetta]

Good poem. Not one of your best. Like I said before, I don't really think you should start lines with, "and". But, then again it is your poem. Your world sounds... really really imaginary....

[furuba4ever]

happy happy! :] it is like a dreamland... a world that's.... perfect.:elephant: