here without you

[Wonderwice]

here without you...
I see you leaving
and there's nothing I can do...

You've been my friend these past 3 years
We went through heaven and hell
And came back as well..
and now you're gone.

I remember those things we did
With a sad smile
will it be the last things
We'll ever do together...?

Wherever you went, I went too
I've always been with you
in class, at school, everywhere
Where will I go now?

I looked up at your strength
Your power to keep on standing
I didn't have that power..
Sometimes I wished I was you.

Life goes on, whichever way you will choose
There are times you'll win
there are times you'll lose
But I'll be here, whatever happens...

I'm not sure what I will do
Probably nothing...
I'm here without you,
alone again.


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for my best friend..it speaks for itself why...^^'

[Dmeth]

It's pretty sounding. I like reading other peoples poetry.

[mimichan1000]

this is very good! even though this for your friend, i'm thinking of Hatsu right now... reading this reminds me of him being gone even more...

[Wonderwice]

Ahw, thanks Mimichan...

Hope I didn't make you sad...

[Kagekotsu]

It's kind of sad which makes it very pretty, good job! ^^ I've always liked to read a bit sad poems, and this is going to be one of my absolute favorites! ^^ Thanks for the good poem JAG. ^^

[YaiiShi°]

Awww, dat is zo mooi, dat is precies hetzelfde gevoel dat ik ook heb bij een vriendin.. T.T Heel mooi oma! ^w^ Heel mooi..

[Princely Dreaming Doll]

I like the poem it is very neat. Interesting and it has a lovely sense behind it.
Keep up your poems cause this is really beautiful.

[Trinity Muse]

The poem is really stonking, JaG. I love it. <3
Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work. ^_^

ZG~

[Wonderwice]

never thought this one would come up ever again...oh well..thanks for the comments everyone ^^

[[BeA]]

lovely!!
really <3 the poem!~
i'll be sure to read another
one of ur poems!... Keep It Up!