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LittleMomo
04-24-2006, 07:24 PM
As I lay on the shaded tree,
I began to think,
about all of the times,
that I was filled with happiness.

Then I see a couple,
kissing, caring and loving each other,
I sighed,
and hoped for a happy relationship.

More and more,
I lay on this tree,
and I think about,
my relationship and my life.

Days go by,
as I daydream in this tree,
this tree maybe,
is a symbolic meaning of true love.

When I look at this place,
no one is here,
until one person,
came up to me and confessed of her love to me.

Ever since,
I dream about love,
it's coming true,
these past dreams.....are coming true

But, I now remember this tree,
as a symbol of love,
and how I love and care,
someday, I hope that I will get true, yet a happy lover
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Enjoy my past dreams about love, and I still go to my tree, and still daydream there. ^-^ Anyway, have fun reading it!

suky
04-24-2006, 08:14 PM
Awww!!! its another pretty poem by Jumpy!!, it's really great, its has alot of sensativeness and passion as well as LOVE!!! and I would say great job!!! Jumpy!! its really wonderful!!!
~your awsome buddie!..... ME!!!!~

LittleMomo
04-25-2006, 08:05 PM
Well, my poems weren't that great as before, but I'll improve suky! Anyway, I'll make another one soon! ^-^

Cat_Demon
04-25-2006, 08:14 PM
ahh good jump making more? I think this one is a very well done poem, shows a lot of emotion (something im not capable of :p) very well done jump, cant wait for more

-kitty was here

bluesoul
04-25-2006, 08:18 PM
Very nice it is good! I like that its long and very good with words. Continue to make poems, they're really good.