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[Wonderwice]

Thisiscalled'poemwithoutwhitespace'
Idon'tspillanysmallplace
Isolovemyallmyfans
andIabsolutelymakenosense.
Soletustalkaboutthebirdsandthebees
abouttheflowersandthetrees
abouttheamazingbluesky
aboutthequestionwhy
aboutthesecrectsoflife
aboutadayorfive
ohletustalkaboutoursharedemo-ness
aboutthegunandit'sloveliness
oh,therewillbenosuntoshine
andit'sforbiddentobehappy
allthehappinessismine
youcanbethepreppy
thisisannoyingdon'tyouthink?
Yes it is. End.




End. Have fun reading. If you can read it in the first place xP
Oh yeah. please leave some comment. How negative it may be, I don't mind!

[LittleMomo]

It's a great poem, and I kinda know why it's like this ^-^ Keep itup!

[Wonderwice]

Ahw, thanks!
didn't know it had a deeper reason xP

[Dmeth]

I would like it more if I had the patience to read it all..


...I'm lazy..

[.....]

This reminds me of somthing else I read somwhere but I can't remember what it was.

[Wonderwice]

heh, thanks I guess ^^'

[.....]

I think that it is a good poem.

[bafflequeen]

it was a bit hard to read but i manage to read it anyway
nice poem....it's really profound
good job!