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Princely Dreaming Doll
04-24-2006, 12:05 PM
Am I that
hopeless to you
that you would
be able to trade
me off

In my swollen
womb of insecurity
in my tears of
no joy

In all that suffering
why would you
trade me in
when I belong

To no one
what diesease did
I fail upon you
if gave me life
why isn't that life
getting love?

What virus
did I fufill you
with what
disease was it
the diesease of
a lifeless scream
of birth?


Or was it something
more?
Why do you never answer?
I hate you

Evangeline
04-24-2006, 02:11 PM
Ooo, so strong and dark.
Some of my favorite kind, I like!
Good job on the poem. btw, I like your other two poems as well. Your thread was closed so I couldn't respond, but I like them, awesome job on those too!

poi_lkj_ask
04-24-2006, 02:15 PM
what kind of crak have you been smoking

poi_lkj_ask
04-24-2006, 02:16 PM
no im relly mean it

Princely Dreaming Doll
04-24-2006, 02:56 PM
I'm not smoking anything
Another part of the series Hopeless:

I hear the voices
and reach my
hand out

I'm that hopeless
struggling in my own
hunger and feeding
myself with
hatred

It burns me
It hates me
in a sea of
tears

In a sea of
blood my blood
Your blood

I reach my hands
out depsretly trying
to catch you
for you to finally
love me