Not a day goes by

[Vendetta]

Not a day goes by,
That you don't cross my mind,
Not a day of my life,
That I don't want to be your wife,
I keep you in my heart,
So we can part,
Not a day goes by,
That you're not on my mind....
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Enjoy.. thanks for reading... I know, it's short:D

[Daenerys]

You notice that part has a bunch of extra a's?

And I don't like how you ended it, it would have been better without the last two lines.

[Evangeline]

Short and sweet! ^^
Nice poem Vendetta, it's cute.

[Vendetta]

You notice that part has a bunch of extra a's?

And I don't like how you ended it, it would have been better without the last two lines.
Well, that is how I end many of my poems. Similar, or exact to the beginning. That is how I write formal letters also, I think it is nice. But, anyways thanks for posting your opinion.