dark

[LittleMomo]

dark, the cause of death,
it makes you shiver,
makes you fear it,
we need the darkness,
because too much light,
can destroy us,
so that's why we need darkness,
even though we hate it soemtimes,
we are just gonna have to live with it,
so don't worry,
dark is always there,
during the night,
or during day,
at the shadows,
it's everywhere,
and you can't stop it.
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enjoy!

[Riot11]

dark, the cause of death,
it makes you shiver,
makes you fear it,
we need the darkness,
because too much light,
can destroy us,
so that's why we need darkness,
even though we hate it soemtimes,
we are just gonna have to live with it,
so don't worry,
dark is always there,
during the night,
or during day,
at the shadows,
it's everywhere,
and you can't stop it.
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enjoy!
The first 8 line seem misplaced, like thy dont realy belong. After that though it becomes very good.