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LittleMomo
04-23-2006, 01:36 PM
It makes you warm,
with it's wonderful temperature,
it determines how you feel,
like when you're crazy, or mad,
fire and nature,
can be both enemies,
or just be allies,
they help us,
from the deaths of winter,
fire, do you love it?
love it so much that,
you want to live with it?
Fire is too hard to live with,
it can cause problems,
and fire can mean something,
like the fire of hell,
but not all fires are bad,
some are useful,
so use fire with caution.
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making more element poems, enjoy everyone! ^-^

animeangellover
06-27-2006, 11:08 AM
i liked it thats a catchy poem!

LittleMomo
06-27-2006, 11:14 AM
I'm glad that you're the first person to read and comment on this poem. My elemental poems are going back up again. ^ ^ Thank you, I might be able to make poems for a while.

chii-fan-lover
06-27-2006, 12:38 PM
wow... nice poem!! ^^

Yukari
06-27-2006, 01:05 PM
It was a great poem. I loved it. can't wait to see more