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LittleMomo
04-22-2006, 07:39 PM
Gladly, I thought,
I had the best day of my life.
Until, one thing,
the thing that seprated me,
and my loved one,
is this force you called death,
why is it,
that you think about this?
You don't know how much I feel,
the feel of what you call pain,
but you think is wrong....
you think I'm happy?
No, my light is fading,
you think I'm just crazy?
No, I just care for you,
but you don't care,
of how others feel about you,
death will lead you to nothing,
is will cause more pain...

FarEastStyle
04-22-2006, 07:43 PM
Very Nice, your really skillful and genuine with your words.
Do more uplifting poems.