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Vendetta
04-22-2006, 05:30 PM
We are the used,
The abused,
The tortured,
The hurt.

You are the loved,
The liked,
The wanted,
The best.

You may be best but I still hate you,
I hope you hate me too,
No not envy but HATE with a passion,
Leave me alone you B****,
I don't like the loved,
The abused are my friends,
So leave me alone,
And don't talk to me.

Program
04-22-2006, 05:45 PM
Oh, you mixed it, i never thought of anything like that before, It's pretty good.

Marie2007
04-22-2006, 05:48 PM
Wow great mix of the feelings

Vendetta
04-22-2006, 06:16 PM
I have mixed things before. I've compared "Tears v. Smiles" in one of my older poems. Anyways, thank you for the comments.