The rebel within

[Vendetta]

The rebel within,
Is slowly being exposed,
I won't take it anymore,
I'm not ignorant, Illiterate, And Disrespectful,
Expressing how I feel inside,
Never again will I hide,
I feel so great like this,
Don't tell me what to do,
I have a mind of my own,
The rebel within, has shown....

[furuba4ever]

very solemn... that's really good!! I wish I could write as good as that... Great job!

[Vendetta]

I don't really like this one too much, It isn't one of my best work....

[furuba4ever]

really? if that's not a good poem, then a great poem must be, really good. if i make sense.

[Music Fiend]

Heh, I thought it was a good poem. It could have used some more length, to bring out the passion and the fiery of the "rebel within", but still, a nice poem.