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Vendetta
04-22-2006, 04:02 PM
I let myself open,
Now I'm broken,
You used me,
A doll, that's what I'll always be,
With me you play,
Then, you're gone the next day,
Rip off my arm,
I'm not afriaid of your harm,
Lose your love for this doll,
Sell me, let me fall,
I remember when we used to play,
Oh, how much I miss that day....

Program
04-22-2006, 04:11 PM
This one is interesting, I can actually understand what you're going through in this poem. I love it!

animeangellover
06-27-2006, 11:13 AM
cool poem, you have good creativity i think its very emotional

Vendetta
06-30-2006, 04:49 PM
Thanks. I was making it kind of metaphorical because that was just like I felt like a doll.

TodayIsMine
07-01-2006, 08:08 AM
I was easily able to see how you were feeling, obviously, "You used me" gave it away, but the rest of the lines did their part as well. I'm not one for obviousness, I prefer to find hidden messages and confusion, but, this one was good in its obviousness...it was straightforward and very clear. Good stuff.

Vendetta
07-28-2006, 04:59 PM
Yea, I wasn't going to put that in but somehow felt obligated to.